86 Nickels Script

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So this is an early draft of the screenplay that eventually became Death of a Dishwasher. Very clearly, I don’t know what I’m doing structuring a screenplay — but some of the scene’s really snap. And the lines are still funny. I skimmed it as I was building this post and I chuckled

to myself in several places. This is good sign, because I’m pretty critical of my own work.
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